Looking at examplar student blogs

In today's lesson we had to compare three student blogs that were released by the exam board, AQA. These are the following blogs:

http://blogs.grammar.sch.gg/00laner01
http://blogs.grammar.sch.gg/gabriellesmith
http://blogs.grammar.sch.gg/danieldegaris

Whilst looking through these blogs we compared them to a mark scheme to see what we individually thought they would get marked as. Through discussion and comparison to the exam board marks, Gabrielle's blog scored the highest with 20/20 on research and planning; Rebecca's blog scored 17/20 and Daniel's blog scored a high level 3 with 15/20.

After looking at these blogs I have come up with three ways in which I can improve my own blog:

1. More depth in blog posts
2. Justification of ideas
3. Clear presentation of ideas