Concepts of short films/music videos

In class today we were given nine small pieces of paper. On each piece was an important aspect of music videos/short films. Firstly we had to organise these pieces of paper into a 'diamond of 9', in which the top piece was what we considered to be most important, all the way through to least important.

Here's how I originally ordered the nine features:

Then after looking at the mark scheme for an A, I reordered the importance of the features:

And here is what the mark scheme says for an A -

There is evidence of excellence in the creative use of most of the following technical skills: 

• material appropriate for the target audience and task
• using titles appropriately according to institutional conventions
• using sound with images and editing appropriately for the task set
• shooting material appropriate to the task set, including controlled use of the camera, attention to framing, variety of shot distance and close attention to mise-en-scene
• using editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer and making selective and appropriate use of shot transitions and other effects.